Can a few people give me honest feedback about my resume? I’ve been applying to jobs like crazy but keep getting the rejection email.

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Take your high school off.

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Double columns like this can really eff with ATS systems companies use. Switch to a more simple ATS resume format. I like the one Wonsulting offers on their website.

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I hate it so much, but these are the games we must play.

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From a recruiter… the color, the format especially in an ATS system. A resume like this will parse really badly making it hard to read.

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I’d take the objective statement off

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You can absolutely squeeze that into a single page. Consider sticking to standard formatting. You should remove objective but can consider a summary if your experience includes bouncing around.

All that said I’m a many-rejection practitioner too 😂

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I would put your name at the top of the resume not “human resource specialist changemaker”; remove all the icons with social media links and write out the @ or url; I saw this online but instead of an objective, give your elevator pitch in the top — this is in case a recruiter only gets to read the first sentence of your resume they will have a good summary of your experience — “I am a human resource specialist with # YOE in blah blah blah blah. I have skills in [add technical skills].” Use the basic resume format, it’s gets through the bots and recruiters are familiar with them so they know where to look for what they want to know about you. Remember your objective isn’t to wow your recruiter with you design skills, you are just trying to make their job easier for the 10 secs they glance at your resume. Oh and make it one page.

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Make it super simple. One line for employer and dates. I even bullet my job description. No color or tables in your resume. Simple font.

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I would start with not having change maker in bold
I can’t download the full resume for some reason to give more insight but maybe highlight the change maker part in objective

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Thank you everyone! My company doesn’t use the latest AI software, so my experience with them is limited. I’ll make those changes and hopefully start getting more interviews!

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Are you submitting it as a pdf? I have been told to submit as a word document

Honestly, I feel like it’s all moot anyways, the only way to get a decent job is just networking, networking, networking.

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Working with a recruiting and resume team they say the new AI bots companies use have been known to get flustered by lines under the name on a resume and by the right align side and boot important information out of your resume.

Keep to one page

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