First of all I hope you all had a great Thanksgiving with friends and family (and lots of yummy food). Unfortunately back to the grind tomorrow and back to searching for new job opportunities, this is my most updated resume and I’m not sure if this is the right format to use, would you consider this to be “too modern”?? Should I go back to a more simple format like the very last picture? Any tips/suggestions are welcome, thank you for your time. MORE PICTURES IN COMMENT SECTION.

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Certainly looks clean from a format-sense, but I think you could probably condense it. Summary doesn't need to be as long as it is, and bullet points could be shrunk a bit.

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This one will likely make it through the automated resume processing better than the others.

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Your summary is way too much.

The left sidebar is a distraction and a wasted use of space. Also your summary section is very dense and way to long. You should change the entire format.

The Wharton resume template is very professional and organized. Try to keep it to a single page format. Good luck!

Find a better format, OP. And you can do away with the summary. You should also include your skills. Make it a single-page resume.

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