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Your resume looks okay. Have you tried going the referral route for getting an interview?

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Seems pretty solid. I would try to reduce the number of bullet points in each position. Then, you could both increase the font size and ensure you focus the reader on the essential takeaways

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I don’t know how should I ask for referral? I feel like I am taking help without helping the person who is referring me

You can even email me at pate1623@purdue.edu or prayanshpatel99@gmail.com

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Your resume is solid. You might want to look into doing rich text format when you submit for ATS purposes

What font size do you recommend for resume? 10 or 11?

Above are all great points! Another perspective, I think it could make your resume more distinguishable by listing some relevant experience(internship, research assistant, projects etc) in the US as an international student since the HRs here are more familiar with the American schools and companies.

Read the two hour job search by Steve dahlton. Really helped me learn how to network and get face time with those already in the company which is critical nowadays to getting pulled out of the stack of resumes.

I have worked at Tesla retail and at Tessa corporate so what I’m gonna say comes from experience.

I absolutely love what you’ve done from your metrics to your projects. But it sounds like you’re hyping things up too much. Let me explain…

For example your first bullet point for L.K. It’s a little long and my eyes glazed over it.

At Tesla we love things RIGHT to the point. Here is an example of how I would reword it: Using root cause analysis (other methods) I identified defects in 50 square pipes blah blah blah.

I am not sure exactly what you did or how you did it. But cut right to the chase you know? It really does help :)

That is my main feedback point. Tesla is looking for people who do good work but who are also above to communicate it well, fast, efficiently, and with no drama. Take away what you want from that lol but I hope you see my point. Move the education to the bottom of your resume. Is your degree more important then what you did or do? Probably not you know? Even though it looks like your still in school pick what is more important to you or what you feel is more important.

tesla doesn’t care we’re you went to school. We care about your work

I hope my unformatted rant made sense to you and gave you pointers. PM me on here if you want a referral or have more questions. I hope this helped a little

Ensure that you highlight the skills the job is requiring

Hi Tesla 1 and 2, Id love to learn more about your work. If you could contact me at LENN@gatech.edu

Thank you so much Tesla 2 for your help. I appreciate your efforts. I am not able to reply to your comment nor able to message you in private idk why. If it’s possible can we connect on LinkedIn my name is Prayansh Patel and I would really appreciate if you can refer me for fall internship.

Happy to refer!

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