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Great lines for Sir Kensington! That’s the work that shines for me. Just continue to come up with and develop simple ideas with smart executions. Some of the campaigns feel disconnected to me, like the national violence hotline one. Your personality really comes through in your book which is nice. Just land that internship!

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Thanks for the feedback CD. The general consensus seems that the OOH portion of this piece is hurting my book more than helping. I’m going to have to take it out and rework it. Ultimately I’ll aim to replace the campaign entirely.

Your first project is password protected and your second one is an absolute rip off of the well-known SwissLife ads. That’s enough for me not to look at the rest

Nothing like a swift punch in the gut to kick things off! Lol. Thanks for the feedback. You’re right—not a good idea to have a locked project first. And in my defense, I came up with those lines before knowing about the SwissLife ads, but I won’t have the opportunity to explain that. I’ll keep that in mind as I restructure and replace projects. 🙏🏼

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