I have decided to apply to grad school and need to write a personal essay. Can y’all give any suggestions or advice on things to be sure to include? The schools didn’t provide questions to answer. My undergrad didn’t require a personal essay when I was admitted. Not exactly sure where to start. I am applying for a MSc Accounting for reference. Also applying to schools in London but live in the states.

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Ah the toughest part of applying to grad school.
I’d write about the defining moment that made you realize this degree was the right thing for you. Reference a unique situation whether personally or professionally. Mention how the program/school will help your career and what you see yourself doing with it post grad.

Stay away from cliche stuff like “getting through covid was my motivating factor for going to school”. Yes covid was tough but...I’m sure tons of students will reference it in some way. The statement is for you to shine. Reflect on your experiences and see what you come up with.

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What are the essay prompts?

AM- why are you applying to the particular course
What do you hope to achieve through studying this course
How’s your past/current studies/experience supports your application
How is this course relevant to your future career/academic goals
Motivation for studying this course and why this school
Relevant knowledge, skills, experience, from school, extra curricular activities, hobbies and interest, employment and volunteering, achievements and awards
Why London over other UK counties
Interest and suitability for this course

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