I want to use peer feedback to help students create better paragraphs. I am worried the students will be too harsh or cruel with each other.

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Provide examples of constructive criticism and ways to use it as a learning tool.

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Model, model, model.

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In addition to what others have said, also model how to share strengths of writing. I always have kids come up with 3 things they liked about the paper to share in addition to constructive advice.

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A teacher explained if I write the subjects and the nouns on chart paper and then have students pull from their to complete a paragraph gives them the opportunity to write and create paragraphs with meaning and teaches them what they need to know.

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A beautiful Sunday another idea for Christmas treats. Wrapping paper $1.00 gift ie. toothbrush, chapstick, glowstick but wrapped one at a time as each student unwraps each receives a different gift the anticipation is priceless!!!!

I agree with modeling! We also have a revising checklist we use that really helps keep everyone on track while peer revising.

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