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Is “make it more impactful” specific enough feedback from your CD?

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I would assume make it more impactful means do something to make it either get noticed or to be more believable. It probably is a reaction to the work being generic and expected. Make it stand out from the crowd. If it’s direction given to a junior, it is not sufficient.

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I think what this means is “give people a reason why they want to talk about it”

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No. You need to hear specifically what’s not working with your idea. Is it not funny enough, surprising enough, edgy enough? Is it fixable or should you start fresh? Tell your CD to use their words. (No, don’t.) But you can ask for more detail.

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No - but it’s feedback you’ll get a lot. I would ask for something more specific. Sometimes they mean use “bigger” words (sigh), sometimes they mean making it more direct (we will vs. we should/we can/what if we) or sometimes they mean taking out transitional words (but, so, and, “that’s why” at the beginning of sentences). Sometimes, it’s all of the above or maybe even a “start over.” I’d ask and maybe frame it around a sentence or two that you felt could use some punching up. “When you say ‘more impactful,’ is this what you’re thinking?”

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