Roast my resume... Then tell me how to improve it. Looking to go into CRE Acquisitions or Development.

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Put your masters degree before your bachelors degree.

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RU1 - I don't even think I can like a comment lol what is this system

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RA1, will do.

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CRE1 & RU1, thank you both for the feedback. I haven't looked at my resume in years so this is all great advice.

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Why the hell can't I reply to your individual comments?

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I think you need more fishbowl activity to unlock replies and private messages.

Is this a joke?
If not, let's start by fixing the margins (find a good resume template online [Harvard, Wharton etc,.]). Then, move on to fixing the language - tell us more about what you did instead of vague descriptions. Please do re-upload when you're done with those edits so we can actually give some better insight specific to roles that you're interested in.

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No problem! Glad could help. I'm also unable to reply because I'm new lol, so if you can like my comment it would help me a lot!

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Each bullet should be an action and result. Include numbers, percentages, quantify as much as you can.

Probably the biggest thing is to make sure your bullet points under each experience has an answer to "so what?" question. E.g managed accounting sales ... To increase x (or resulting in x). The rest should be just resume formatting which I think you can just copy from any decent template (heard some of the ivy league business school templates are good)

“So what” is a very good way for anyone to approach resume bullets.

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