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You could say “leading strategy and operations-focused engagement, coordinating directly with senior client executives” or something
Awesome feedback! Thanks a ton, bud!
An accomplished business strategy and operations professional with over a 8-years of experience in consulting, finance, payments, product management, data analysis, and operations and process improvement. Deep program management capabilities leading strategy and operational framework, seasoned in using data analytics to provide business critical insights, reinvent businesses and help grow revenue. Looking to grow career at a fast paced, customer-centric organization through building long term, trusted relationships with executive management and business partners to maximize impact and exceed goals.
This feels very wordy. Any suggestions how to trim it down and still maximize the message?
That’s what I was using in the past. But I feel like I need additional lines to show what I can do for the company. The first line doesn’t show that.
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That’s a lot of buzzwords. Sentences 1 and 2 are redundant, they both talk about you and your experience. Merge and kill some of the less relevant phrases
I agree. Take out the "a" before 8 years. Spell out numbers under 11. So put "eight."
How about this? >>
An accomplished business strategy and operations professional with over eight (8) years of experience in consulting, finance, payments, product management, data analysis, and operations and process improvement. Deep program management and consulting experience leading strategy and operational framework. Seasoned in using data analytics to provide business critical insights and help businesses achieve targeted operational efficiency.
The “leading... operational framework” doesn’t make sense - what do you mean by leading a framework?
Analyzing the key focus areas of framework (e.g., target operating model, GTM strategy), developing it, executing it through influencing the senior executives and business leadership team
I guess it’s a bit unclear what framework you are referring to since framework is a prettty general term
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Are you really in strategy or just using those words?
IDK what you mean. I am part of the strategy and business transformation practice at a big 4. 🤷♂️