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Yeah, in this MeToo era, you gotta lose the “Date Me” and “Unmarried” theme. Comes off as a bit creepy.

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You have some incredible work, really well done overall + it looks really clean. You’re really strong on the idea & concept front. There are just a few things to consider:

You don’t have much writing in your portfolio, is this done on purpose based on your career goals? You have tons of scripts and video content which is good but no headlines/enough copy for a CD to gauge your capability as a copywriter. I can see why you’d do this if you’re looking to transition to more of a script-based production house creative.

You have a tiny typo on your british airways page where you’ve written ‘to’ twice.

The dating metaphor is a bit odd to me as is the need to specify you’re unmarried. It could just be a subjective thing but in Me Too era I wouldn’t even put the words ‘sexual harassment’ on a profile, especially as a joke

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Super helpful thanks everyone. Will for sure change date me

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Hey, as a fellow Ogilvy writer who’s worked on two of the accounts in your book, you’ve done some really super social video . Fast, funny, on point. Don’t know how well social video works for clients, but I want it to. It’s such a fun, short medium. As the first reply noted, it might be good to add headlines even if they are banners. Ooh would be amazing if you have it. I’d also demote Qualcomm, it was a sexy idea but a horrible film (not your fault, obv)

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