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Yeah, in this MeToo era, you gotta lose the “Date Me” and “Unmarried” theme. Comes off as a bit creepy.

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You have some incredible work, really well done overall + it looks really clean. You’re really strong on the idea & concept front. There are just a few things to consider:

You don’t have much writing in your portfolio, is this done on purpose based on your career goals? You have tons of scripts and video content which is good but no headlines/enough copy for a CD to gauge your capability as a copywriter. I can see why you’d do this if you’re looking to transition to more of a script-based production house creative.

You have a tiny typo on your british airways page where you’ve written ‘to’ twice.

The dating metaphor is a bit odd to me as is the need to specify you’re unmarried. It could just be a subjective thing but in Me Too era I wouldn’t even put the words ‘sexual harassment’ on a profile, especially as a joke

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Super helpful thanks everyone. Will for sure change date me

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Hey, as a fellow Ogilvy writer who’s worked on two of the accounts in your book, you’ve done some really super social video . Fast, funny, on point. Don’t know how well social video works for clients, but I want it to. It’s such a fun, short medium. As the first reply noted, it might be good to add headlines even if they are banners. Ooh would be amazing if you have it. I’d also demote Qualcomm, it was a sexy idea but a horrible film (not your fault, obv)

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Hi all. I’m a new hire as an associate tech consultant, been here for ~2 weeks.

This week, I’ll be meeting my senior manager (who is also my counsellor) in a 1:1 virtual session. Any tips on specific questions I should ask? I’m meeting him for the first time and thought I might want to learn a lot from him!

Thanks :D

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My first fur baby’s first birthday! 🎂 Needless to say I got a little emotional about how fast time flies😂

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Hi Group, seems like it should be basic format, but I just can not get it to work. a list of data and want to alternate shade (blue,white,blue,etc) each line but if I have multiple lines I want to group together and they all shade the same. I want to group by the same data in column A, and the number of rows that are the same could vary. So let’s say row 1& 2 same entry in column A(blue) row 3 different (white) row 4,5,6 same as each other different to other rows (blue) etc… help 🙏

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Opening at KPMG GLOBAL
For .NET/Azure profile at Bangalore location, please DM

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What has better WLB and comp, being a heme onc physician or climbing the ranks of D/SD/VP in R&D or commercial strategy for an oncology line? Not taking into account initial path to get to these positions.

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What would be the hike percentage for getting promoted from Associate consultant to Consultant?
Will I get the promotion percentage + year end cycle hike percentage (let's assume that I am getting 3 rating) or just promotion percentage?
YOE : 6+

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JPMC is looking forward to retain me by matching the salary...
what should I keep in mind before accepting the retention

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Lifting you all up in prayer as this new week begins. Peace for burdens, sharpened discernment at work, and Gods love and favor from the tops of your head to the soles of your feet. 💓

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Just accepted an offer to come to Meta as a content designer. Spent the last 7 years in digital agencies doing copywriting and UX writing, what do I need to know before I start?

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Freelance talent available. Would love to discuss any opportunities you guys come across

On another time, a younger me would have loved the Porsche Heist ad. Now, however, the concept just feels dated (and a bit lite for Porsche). Fun to shoot tho. Am I the only one?

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Do anyone of you subscribe to the motley fool or any other stock advisor tools? Recommendations and thoughts on how useful they are?

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How much per week/month do you spend on daycare?

Thoughts on $HOOD? Buy at this price or stay away?

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Does anyone know anything about Square as a company? Specifically the strategic partnerships team? How is it viewed, compensation, company culture at Square?

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Have a crush on my co-worker. He asked me out to go rock climbing one-on-one after we were texting for a while and I acted awkwardly when we went because I didn’t know if it was a date (nothing was explicitly said). Now I’m stuck in this weird limbo state where things have fizzled out but I’m re-reading texts and think he might’ve actually had a crush too and I pushed him away. Ambiguity sucks.

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Hi fishes,
Currently I am invested in two mutual funds:
UTI nifty index
Parag parikh flexi

Which other MFs are worth investing?

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Many companies have posted different vacancies for Sr Copywriters and Creative Copywriters with the same amount of experience. I am not for the labels but can anyone explain the difference?

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Thanks in advance! I haven’t had a lot of opportunity to do big campaign work, which is what I’m craving. Wondering if there’s a way to make my work look bigger without getting too cluttered.

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Attention Ad Students! Go apply to Mobilize, 22squared’s 48 hour ad competition! It’s a really fun opportunity where you get to compete against other teams on a brief, and also have your portfolio reviewed. Apply at

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As a liberal arts student, I’ve been piecing together how to create a killer portfolio but am at a point where I need some personal feedback. Would anyone be willing to look my portfolio over and provide advice on how to improve it? Thank you!

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Sorry, is this bowl for portoflio reviews, or portfolio reviews?

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Anyone have experience setting up more in-depth analytics for portfolio websites? Any ways to get more information about who is looking at my book? I'm on squarespace. Cheers!

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Hi! Any art directors or creative directors open to giving some feedback via DM on my portfolio? I have mostly in-house experience, and could use guidance on what I might do to get in with agency work and more branding.

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What do you think is the best site to make your book on as a copywriter?

How often is everyone updating their portfolio? Should I be updating mine every few months or would be okay to go longer?

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Can you put spec work in your book?

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Q: I’m reworking/updating my books— how are you going to include toolkit for other markets in your book? (Want to sell my contribution For concept and art direction+design in collaterals)

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I see this question about how to display side projects often, so putting this out there for anyone who might find it useful:

There’s no such thing as side projects, in my eyes. Every project is an opportunity to display your creativity, and the few you’re most proud of make it to your book. Generally, the consensus these days is that we want our advertising to not look/feel like advertising. So, why should you be concerned to separate what was and wasn’t “advertising?”

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Just finished Train Dreams by Denis Johnson. Superb. Gonna start Tree of Smoke next.

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