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I didn’t have time to check out all your work, but I liked what I saw. the things I would tweak are minimal below.
• Why date yourself with your URL? It’s not an easy to remember your website either and adding your birthdate seems off to me. I like people not knowing my exact age, instead going by my title or background or skill set.
• Your bio seems very generic for a copywriter. I learned very little about you after reading it. Give us something that isn’t just about how you work, but things that help us remember you out of the many portfolios we see everyday. Doesn’t have to be funny but sometimes we like to know about your outside interests or favorite whatever.
• The top bar with grey background and black type isn’t a good contrast for me. If you keep the grey, make it slightly lighter with white copy.
Otherwise you got some solid work. Good luck!
Thank you for your feedback! I'll make those changes. I'll work on the description and the look.
About the URL, I guess I'll have to wait almost a year to change it. On the order hand, I have that name in all my social media and video games, thats why I used it.
Again, thank you for the feedback ✌🏻