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You need more conceptual work. I don’t get a strategic insight or big idea from most of your pieces. If your agency doesn’t do that sort of work, then make some side projects or spec work that is more concept based
Better than VZ creative
Change you currently loud, look at me landing page to a scannable snapshot of your work.
Less is more.
It's an interesting presentation of your projects. You're obviously talented. But I feel like I wasn't led straight to your client work. Which is why I would consider hiring you in the first place.
I agree with CW1. Seems like a designer’s book or basic social creative. Needs some big ideas in it
Thanks all for your feedback! I work at a traditional agency but I do a lot of animation/art direction for social as well. We’re almost done with a case study for a campaign launch I was on. Do you think that’ll help bring more conceptual work into my book?
Haha, I tried to crack that d&ad Amazon fresh brief also.
I'm thinking, there's no context for any of the work. Maybe a tiny write up could be good? No more than 2 sentences.
And there's not much campaigny work, as per previous commentators, but then you're also super junior, so stick around and see where your current gig takes you! You definitely got some fun and beautiful things in your book. Take them to the fun, beautiful and conceptually strong direction and you'll be good!
Agree with everyone above- you’re obviously talented, the layout is difficult to navigate especially on mobile. If you’re looking to flex your conceptual chops consider partnering with a writer- if you need to find a copy partner you can check out the fb group “make ads with me” it’s meant to help people find others to partner up with and build their books