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I’d also recommend partnering with an Art Director or designer to help the pieces look better (for all campaigns you include)— I realize you’re trying to get a copywriter role, but it would help the impact of your portfolio regardless.
Agree there’s some fun / good ideas and thinking in here. You have potential, just need to keep working on it. Book180 is a new portfolio school that is only 6 months long, if you are looking to put some more work in and break into the agency world.
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Not bad overall! Personally I didn't have an issue navigating but I agree with others who say to make each client its own page, etc. Make it foolproof.
I also agree that some of the campaigns should go beyond print (blow the concept out via social post, OOH board, ambient, activation, etc)
It looks like you used AI/Midjourney for some of your visuals (weird faces and limbs). I'd have an art director correct the flaws at the very least.
Love the La Quinta concept! Easy to blow out.
Thanks for the great feedback! I really appreciate this!
Could I land a junior copywriting job? Or do I have a long way to go? Either way, any feedback appreciated.
Thank you for the feedback! I’ve only just started working on all this since March and I’ve barely had any time at all to work on it with my full time job. But I’m going to keep working at it and taking suggestions
Just one person's viewpoint - there's some fun thinking here. But these are all one-offs. You're gonna need to keep going with ideas that can stretch into integrated campaigns.
Also what ACD1 said, all your different campaigns should be on their own pages
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