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Your points are generally good but they're lacking specifics.
You mention training programs, but you don't say what those programs were focused on to achieve the results you mention.
If you have opportunities to mention a specific tool or technology you used to manage inventory, say that.
Overall, it's good but could be much stronger. Also I would add a sentence under each company name to highlight what you did as the job title you had. Your ultimate impact and what the company does. This helps to give context because ad a recruiter I have no idea who the first and 3rd companies are now I have to go to linkedin or Google who they are to get an idea if your experience aligns with what I'm looking for - and I'm likely not going to go that far since I have a ton more resumes to look at
I'm concerned that my second page isn't full enough, if I'm going to have one, I assume it needs to be two full pages, right?
It’s fine but you can use ChatGPT to tailor your resume to positions you are applying for and ask which resume template to use in Word. I actually write resumes on the side to help people find a new job opportunity.
bullet points are vague. What position are you after? What was did you oversee? What did the operations consist of?
I like the challenge solution result method of bullet points.
- what was the speficic area you were tasked with overseeing?
- what was your action (using words like “through” “by”)
- what was the tangible result
- for every job function in the JD, you should have corresponding bullet points
On structure:
- way too spaced out. It looks like you are trying to fill the page
- too much spacing