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Hey man - I really like your work. Some super nice things in there. Burger King and YES especially. I've been doing this for way longer than you and I'm pretty jealous of your work. That's a good sign.

Maybe you can try to put English subtitles on all of your videos and make sure the copy is in English in all of your ads though. I think if you're trying to get a job in Amsterdam, London or New York (I guess that's the plan, right?) then you need all of the copy in English. Also try to clean up the English in your write ups. For example lines like this are broken English: "Due to this measures, our campaign generated even more buzz"

You're awesome. I'm sure you've got a great career ahead. I've dropped you a connection request on LinkedIn

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Thank you so much for your comments! Will see what I can do ;)

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Impressive! Love the works and the about page simplicity. Wish you success, hope we can work together in the future, let’s connect on linkedin

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Thank you for checking it!

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It’s pretty good even if it’s a bit stiff for my tastes but there is no reason to have the fake humility of “very fortunate person…” in the copy up top. You have a job where you make ads it ain’t that big of a deal.

Thanks! I wouldn’t say it’s a fake humility as in, I am not saying I’m fortunate to make ads and not save lives, but rather thankful for the opportunity to take the ownership of projects in the first years of my career.

Would you mind telling me what parts are stiff? It’s good to have new perspectives.

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