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Would love if i could get some feedback on my resume. Thank you!

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You pack a lot of information on one page! It's a bit busy looking, but I like the format in general. Is there a way to reduce the amount of words for each bullet point? Or the number of bullet points per job? Or, move to 2 pages. You need a little more white space so reduce your margins a bit.

Also, can you clarify your objective? I like that you added a time frame. Here's my suggestion: "Project Control Analyst and MBA candidate with 5+ years of experience in financial forecasting and budget analysis of multiple projects where I can leverage my strong skills in financial statement analytics to improve financial processes at a .... " (add something here about any particulars you want in an employer - type of business or size of business, etc.). Happy to wordsmith with you if you are interested!

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Hi there, your resume shows strong skills, and it could be even more enhanced.

I have taken note of the tenses on you first role. Ensure to have bullet points in the same tense. Also when you are talking about budgets it okay to take about the figures they add more strength on the bullet. You resume lacks other hard skills, apart from the technical skills aim to have at least 10 -15 of them from the job description.

Since you seem not to be looking for entry-level roles, and you've got a vast experience I'd the the education section below the work experience. Then put the skill section right below the professional summary (which sounds too short and kind of generic).

Otherwise I see you have taken time to really package yourself in a way that shows value.

Have you run the resume through an ATS?

Connect with me on LinkedIn incase you need further support https://www.linkedin.com/in/dorcaskaaria

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