I have been thinking about cookies and tbh, this particular product ever since I saw a picture of it on another bowl. I think it's the design and of course, the fact that I'm a cookie monster. But it made my copywriter-brain think, 'What kind of copy/description for this product would stick with people the same way the design did with me?'. So here's me extending the question to the bowl because I came up with bad ones that I'm not proud of.

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'bringing the patisserie home to you'

- Fresh out of the oven feel
- Give your skin a lil treat ✨

Maybe it’s just my FYP, but whenever I’ve seen that phrase used, it always has that little ✨ afterwards

Try not to lick the bowl

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