Suite à mon dernier post, des feedback sur mon CV en français ? Est-ce correct pour un poste en conseil en France ?

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Merci pour partager (c'est parfait pour practiquer mon français, 😄 je ne suis pas francophone)
(Pardon pour mes fautes:)

Je suis d'accord avec Associate 1.
Votre description devrait être plus 'crispy'. Comme règle general, pas plus de 2 lignes par experience. Vous devriez vous concentrer dans l'impacte. Par exemple, augmentation de chiffre d'affaires, réduction de ( Expenses?), etc.
Également, c'est important de partager ce que vous avez fait et a géneré le résultat. Par exemple: (en anglais parce que je n'ai pas traduit mon CV)
- Led an efficiency project that identified up to 15% Opex cost reduction opportunities for a global bank by analyzing 50+ processes and leveraging robotics and simple Lean levers (just a made up example based on my experience)

Bonne chance!

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Non pas forcément de photo, c'est comme vous voulez
Et d'accord avec les autres, il faut que ce soit plus sharp et moins wordy

D'accord avec les autres! Plus de focus sur les résultats et les chiffres, moins de texte sur chaque expérience, ce serait aussi bien de mettre en avant 1 ou 2 secteurs à ce niveau d'exp. Et pas de photo

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Hello, selon les best practices de casecoach et mes conversations avec des anciens consultants, j’ai plutôt tendance à opter pour une formulation « impact driven » des paragraphes en mettant en avant les résultats que vous avez obtenu.

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