Can someone please take a look at my resume

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fix the date for mizzourec

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For STEM degrees / careers, skills and languages go at the top (followed by certifications since you have AWS practitioner tis good - what’s up with that underline weird)

The proactively bullet needs a major rework / split into 2
Mizzourec is in present tense even though that’s over (2 sentences in one bullet - period at end?)
The dates on the right aren’t very clear? Is that your graduation year for education? The alignment is whack too
Hyphen weird under additional considerations, the bullets are black circles but not aligned with the rest and diff style
Education section format and content is underwhelming
Needs Oxford commas
Bullets can be reordered for importance, the major ones are kinda hidden

Thus concludes my good deed for the day — good luck!

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good man

Reformat! Remove those lines; align date of second job experience.

I agree with the comments above. You should use standard formatting as this formatting is just a little off.

Use a Wharton or HBS template. Pay attention to details like formatting, alignment of date and bullets. It’s worth taking extra time to get the little things right

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