Can Somebody help me with a graceful yet powerful email sample to ask for a counter offer against the offer already provided by an org?

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Respected HR/Salutations,

Hope you are well!

I would like to express my gratitude for having been considered at XYZ role in your esteemed organization.

ABC has for a long time been one of my most respected organisation given your work culture and innovations in tech thereby playing a key role in the value add to society. However, on careful analysis I have come to realise that the current offer is below market standards.

I would thereby like to respectfully decline the offer and hope to cross paths when our aspirations align.

Regards,

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You will mostly get a call or response email from the HR asking for a discussion on the package revision since you have made it abundantly clear that you very much like the organization and the only aspect holding you back is the package. This is more of a take away approach.
You could also directly state -"if we could have a renegotiation call on the offer" but this would not bode well for your stand. As now you may seem to be at their mercy.
Upto you! Please add few more sentences if you want to specifically highlight your urge to renegotiate.

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Koi to reply kro yaar.

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