Talking about weight loss in admissions essays - I lost 100lbs during my first year of college, is it appropriate to talk about that as personal achievement?

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Hell yea! It’s personal achievement. So whatever is personal to you. Damn 100lbs is a lot. I’m trying to lose 15 right now lol

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Yea...I’m in my late 20s. I can power thru maybe noon on some strong af coffee. But if I don’t eat I crash after 2.

I am not sure which schools you are applying to, but I wouldn’t see it as relevant information. It is akin to someone from a low income family inserting their now high net worth in the application.

The business of b-schools is elevating their prestige with entrance and exit stats (along with fundraising from alumni). Your incoming GPA, GMAT, and application essays are used to evaluate your worth as an ‘asset’ in the portfolio of each class. Your likelihood of a high-paying (or high-profile future) is (at best) poorly linked to this type of achievement.

It is very impressive, but the Adcom will value the Olympic team athlete much more.

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Honestly, that’s a huge achievement, and it clearly matters to you, so you should go for it. I think it would be SUPER weird if an admissions committee was like... omg taking about weight, reject. Like think about it, they are people too!

But I think it’s all about what it means for you and what it signified to you... like if it’s all superficial v. What it signified

Congrats btw! That’s amazing!!

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I think it depends how you frame it. I did the same thing and I’m considering framing it as an example of how my determination has been important in reaching goals both personally and professionally.

Yes, you can! Write about why you did it and if you helped others after that. Something on that line. If that’s the base of your entire essay, go ballistic or else keep it within 2-3 lines

Why do you think that would be important for them to know?

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I think it’s a good subject for something like Yale’s commitment essay

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