Writing an essay for college admission. what has worked for you?

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Being original

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I wrote two fairly memorable essays (for me) that worked for all the colleges I really cared about.

The first one in retrospect basically translates to "I'm indecisive and am interested in everything so that's why I chose X university because they have world-class programs in engineering, music, business, and everything else and I can continue to be indecisive in life." Ended up going here and still doing the indecisive bit 12 years later 🤷🏻‍♂️

The second essay I wrote waxed philosophical about the Ship of Theseus and the concept of identity as applied to a hypothetical teleportation machine on Mars that worked by deconstructing your body and recreating an identical copy in a separate location. Ah, the days of the Uncommon Application...

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I talked about how I was the first black person elected president.

Is this for business school? If for college, read some of the Harvard essays.

Looked through email for old essay and am grateful. Moved to the US for college, and now I mentor kids applying to college. Grateful that I am an enabler of other immigrant kids. Unlike our president who, despite going to Wharton does not understand that racism is wrong.

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