Hi everyone! I would really appreciate any sort of feedback on my resume. I’m actively looking for new jobs and opportunities because I’m trying to get something in my field but I’ve been struggling to even get an interview. I need help because I’m seriously at my wits end. I’m no longer happy at my current job and want something better.
Any help would be great.

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Not sure how close you are to Tampa but Pfizer has positions in sales/customer service. Would be happy to connect.

I would make it MUCH more detailed. Any achievements in school or work?

Elaborate more on skills section. I’m assuming you’re looking for communications jobs.

Highlight your skills with key words in the communications field, even if it’s a stretch.

Don’t be scared to add your major university projects on experience section. Try to highlight your university skills and achievements .

A lot of companies use algorithms and auto throw resumes without these key words in the trash

Just looking at it, it has a ton of white space and the bullets look short which I’m assuming aren’t very descriptive or have data point emphasizing your impact

What type of role are you targeting? I'd definitely add more bullets and beef those up a little - especially for your current job. And then tailor it a bit toward whatever positions you're applying for.

I would add more in-depth bullets points. It looks bland and not much to it. More bulk could make it seemingly better in regards to expertise. Employers like to see you know what your doing and not grazing the top (from prior feedback). Expressing your skills could benefit you as well. This is your time to make yourself shine - not shy away. Make yourself as marketable as possible.

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