Hello! I am looking to land a part-time remote copywriting job during my senior year. Can you please offer any critiques to my resume? Gratitude to the student who posted hers! What a great way to use the app

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Look up the Wharton resume template and model it after that

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Try running your resume through an ATS. Your resume looks great, but I see some room for improvement in your word choices. Try matching your resume with a position you want; it should be more accessible from there to start getting interviews.

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I would suggest using the template that is mentioned above It needs to be in standard format. I also would suggest one font color. It looks a little busy with more than one and becomes distracting,

Thank you all for your feedback!

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