Hi Fishbowl! Lately, I've been quite insecure abouw my work. The past half year I've worked at an agency fulltime as a junior creative and copywriter, and in a month I'll start studying again since I still have to graduate (took a gap year to gain more experience before graduation (I'm almost 24)). I have a lot of ambition, and I just feel that as it's now, my portfolio is not good enough yet to really have a good start in the industry yet. Could I please have some constructive feedback?
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Hi Everyone,
Need your suggestions please
I come from a cyber strategy background with very little technical experience.
I want to make a shift towards Devsecops,
Could anyone please suggest what is the best way to build the needed skills /do projects online for the relevant experience?,
Thanks,thanks a lot in advance,!
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Hello! The pieces you have are well-designed but I do have a couple of thoughts.
1. You have too many pieces so it’s overwhelming. I would pick your best 8, maybe 10 pieces.
2. Make the write-ups more concise. We don’t need to see the entire thinking process from start to finish and that gives you something to elaborate on in interviews as well.
3. Include your role in the write-up. Did you concept and write? Did you do more than that?
4. Your campaigns are lacking components. I noticed each one only has 1-2 pieces. Each campaign should show as a collection of pieces that all work together to form a cohesive campaign. What would it look like on social? Was there an activation? Etc.
Good luck with returning to school and don’t get discouraged!