Looking to receive some constructive criticism on current resume as I begin to transition into the tech industry seems like I have most things needed but if I need to add more or take things out that is an easy fix !

Post Photo
like
Posting as :
works at
You are currently posting as works at

1. If you’re going to use two pages, use two pages.
2. You blacked out some personal detail but kept the name at the top.
3. The text is too small and blurry to read the actual content

like

Here’s second page

Post Photo

Can’t read it very well but I would make the summary in third person, make it “administrator” and “certification” in the education section (also trailhead is not the provider it’s Salesforce), and 100% keep it to one page. Can’t emphasize that enough.

Your formatting is a little fancy. While I like it, some recruiters are quite conservative and prefer single line Times New Roman, no color etc.

Can’t tell very well but I think you need to use a lot more buzzwords and technical terms in your summary. Maybe a skills section.

You will have a hard time getting an entry level admin job but since you have recently or are about to graduate I would focus on consultancies who are hiring and training college graduates in salesforce. Your chances will be 1000% higher if not more and many are hiring. Think Capgemini, IBM, Deloitte, and the WITCH consultancies.

I forget the details… wipro, Infosys… cognizant, etc

Related Posts

Hi, I am done with 2 rounds of interview in CGI. Waiting for second round result from past 4 days . Daily I am dropping remainders to the team. But no response. Can I consider it as negative?
CGI

like

Why is it some companies make you reapply to a role when you’re towards the end of the interview process?

Anyone have tips on writing a cover letter without referring to anything in the resume?

like

What's the review process for firms. I have people getting rejected but I haven't heard anything. Is it interviews, offers, rejections? Or is it review/ interview and rejections then offers.

like

Was there ever a resume that you have come across that made you want to hire the person before you even met them? What made it so unique?

like

I've gotten feedback that I'm too honest in my interviews, is that really a con for future employers? 🫤 How do I refrain from doing that anymore?

like

Hey All,
I finished a third round interview, and HR contacted me that afternoon saying I had positive feedback across the board and they would contact me the next day regarding next steps. It’s been two days and they finally get back to me saying they haven’t been able to sync with the hiring manager but will keep me posted. Honestly I wish they would talk with the hiring manager and then let me know the decision instead of checking in. It’s messing with my emotions.

RESUME HELP! I’ve been out of a job for 7 months now. Can anyone provide me feedback regarding my background and experience on my resume? Also suggest any roles? It’s really tough finding a job. 🙁

like

Hello Sharks,
I have cleared 2 technical rounds in
Deloitte . Now there is one more partner interview. Any idea what kind of questions should I expect and what is the success ratio in this round?
Deloitte India Deloitte USI

like

When asked,do you disclose your current rate in an interview? Are you required to provide evidence? What is the norm? Thanks!!!

like

Do Accenture still do case interview for SM level ?

like

Hello All, I have an interview for Salesforce Data & Integration Senior Consultant at Toronto. Can anyone help me with what kind of questions to expect?
10 YoE in the space.

like

Hi fishes,
Need your thoughts.
I am done with my client interview and it went well but they are asking me to come to gugaon location.
I am from Bangalore location.
I directly said to client that I can't since I have my family here.
When I inform this to my manager he is saying how come u say like this to client.according to kpmg policy u need to travel to anywhere to work.
This is not good right. What should be my reply to the client in such a case and how to handle manager on this?

like

1. Need some feedback how anyone proceed during HCL Technologies Discover portal login. It's showing me invalid login continuously and using forget password options, able to login one time by luck 2. BGV documents uploading links are routing to smart portal. Will it be the same credentials which is being used during discover portal login? Asked my recruiter HR, but no reply so far
3. Anywhere we need to accept the offer Letter?
HCL Technologies

like

How bad is it to sound shaky during the case interview? I got everything right and nailed the math but I feel like I sounded like I was about to cry even though I was confident 🤦🏻‍♀️

like

Partners - do recruiters/headhunters ever reach out to you? What types of roles/levels do they reach out for?

When you independently search for other opportunities (if you do), what types of roles do you look for?

like

Wondering if anyone can share the approximate timeline after applying to Target Corp. to hearing something from them. Applied 9/1 and on the applicant portal the status still says “in progress.” I got a great internal referral, but I’ve not reached out to the hiring manager. 😬 I know there were a few hundred applicants — what’s a realistic timeline and what could I say to the hiring manager if I reach out to them. Many thanks.

like

Does MBB accept applications where you don’t have an undergrad?

likehelpful
like

Whats the bench period in Hashedin by deloitte , after how many days we usually get allocated to projects? How about client interviews? #HashedIn

like

More Posts

Hello All, I have an interview for Salesforce Data & Integration Senior Consultant at Toronto. Can anyone help me with what kind of questions to expect?
10 YoE in the space.

like

Hi all! After graduating with my MBA with a focus in project management, I moved organizations to go from an EMR education manager to a full time project manager specializing in EMR implementation projects. I’ve found that although I enjoy the work- changing organizations and roles in a remote world was harder than I anticipated. I want to be great at my job and I think connecting with others that have gone through similar things could help.

like

Do we have any ZS Music club, where like minded people can meet/discuss/practice/jam music?

like

New in town, where do I go to meet people (for friends and dating)?

like
like

So my fiancé and I are having a microwedding in Rocky Mountain National Park next year, and we’re working with an elopement planner.
She sent over a sample ceremony (intro, sweet poems + passages to be read, and example vows), and we read through it last night. I was reading it out loud while my fiancé made dinner, and it just hit me that this is really happening. I’m just really happy that I found someone who is willing to take a vow to spend his life with me and I’m so excited for that day :)

like

Hi fishes,
Need your thoughts.
I am done with my client interview and it went well but they are asking me to come to gugaon location.
I am from Bangalore location.
I directly said to client that I can't since I have my family here.
When I inform this to my manager he is saying how come u say like this to client.according to kpmg policy u need to travel to anywhere to work.
This is not good right. What should be my reply to the client in such a case and how to handle manager on this?

like

Hi Fishes, Wish you a great day ahead 😊🤗.

like

Hello Fishes,

Can i survive comfortably with 7.5 LPA at place like Gurgaon??

I’m a bachelor with little obligations to send money to home, belongs to a middle class family.
Not many wishes, not a party person either, likes to spend time mostly at home.

Can anyone please help me making my decision of whether i should take the job or not. I’m really confused and read 100s of articles regarding it but not convinced.

like
like

What kind of appreciation do you prefer? Private or public?

like

There is someone from Vodafone group services limited who is continuously writing against Scaler Academy and applied ai courses and continuously promoting ineuron, I don't know why he's doing so, both the courses are good in there own perspective Scaler Academy data science program is awesome and on other side ineuron is good and cheap as well

I want exact review

likesmart

Hello Fish Friends! Does a PhD count as project management experience?

like

1. Need some feedback how anyone proceed during HCL Technologies Discover portal login. It's showing me invalid login continuously and using forget password options, able to login one time by luck 2. BGV documents uploading links are routing to smart portal. Will it be the same credentials which is being used during discover portal login? Asked my recruiter HR, but no reply so far
3. Anywhere we need to accept the offer Letter?
HCL Technologies

like

Battle royale, which F500 CEO is your champion? Money has no influence.

I’ll start, Jeff Bezos is my champion. Pure physicality and oddly deep voice

likefunny

I have recently joined EY SaT group as senior consultant recently in Netherlands. I’m tripple masters in MS economics, MBA and MS business analytics. Have 4 YOE in different industries but no M&A experience specifically. Any ideas what company should be offering me? I’ll be working as expert on commercial due diligence, FDD and valuation teams and doing automation alongside. is it wise to demand higher salary or promotion soon after I have proven that I can work and do it better than most?EY

likefunny

Does someone know good instructors to get SCM certification?

like

Sometimes I feel weird when my coworkers reach out to ask how I'm doing. The police brutality and protests are nothing new.

like

If I have to fly next week for business, do I have to remove mask/face shield for security check?

helpfullike

Additional Posts in Salesforce Professionals

Non-tech person here: does anyone know how to download salesforce icons that can be used in PPT?

Within Salesforce, @Quip, Slack, Tableau Software how often are there leadership changes at the VP or above level? Is this an annual thing? X years after acquisition?

likesmart

Hey hey! My company is looking for a Salesforce Admin with a few years of experience with a heavy focus on Service Cloud and managing Support/Service oriented tools. Feel free to reach out with any recommendations!

like

What compensation could I expect at Deloitte Digital with 3yrs of Salesforce experience as a consultant in Chicago? Looking for ball park range to help with negotiations

like

Would anyone be willing to give me a referral to salesforce?

like

Salesforce Commerce Cloud - what are your thoughts and is it worth it to specialize in the platform?

Any exit opportunities from Deloitte making around 140k strong tech background with 6+ yr experience . Mainly looking for architect level role

How’s Salesforce market for a senior technical architect with 12 years of experience? Which city is best and what salary to expect in US?

like

Anyone done the billing superbadge? Need some help with step 13

like

Anyone here works at Brillio? How good is the company for opportunities?

like

Do you get corporate discount for getting a new phone at Salesforce?

likefunny

Hello all!

I have my final interview which is a 1-hour presentation this week for an AE role. Any tips please? Thanks!

like

Would you take a little bit of a pay-cut to take a job you want and to get out of a job that you hate?

like

Can anyone speak to the culture of the Salesforce practice at Slalom? Mostly curious about work life balance / average hours per week

like

Any Australian based Demandware experts looking for jobs?

like

Any Salesforce folks work for TATA Consultancy{TCS)?

like

Any data points on expected comp for a Salesforce Senior Manager - Project Manager position?

like

Any SFCC Architects or Tech leads looking for a change? I have an urgent requirement in my team. Please DM for more information. Thanks

like

Anyone at Salesforce know how to lookup the level-grade of a specific person from the org chart?

like

What's the most fun certification you have studied for?

likefunny

New to Fishbowl?

Download the Fishbowl app to
unlock all discussions on Fishbowl.
That was just a preview…
Sign Up to see all discussions
  • Discover what it’s like to work at companies from real professionals
  • Get candid advice from people in your field in a safe space
  • Chat and network with other professionals in your field
Sign up in seconds to unlock all discussions on Fishbowl.

Already a user?
Login here

Share

Embed this post

Copy and paste embed code on your site

Preview

Download the
Fishbowl app

See what’s happening in your industry
from the palm of your hand.

A phone with Fishbowl app

Scan your QR code to download
Fishbowl app on your mobile

Download app

Sign up for free to view this conversation on Fishbowl

By continuing you agree to Terms of Use and Privacy Policy

Already have an account? Log in

Sign up for free to continue using Fishbowl

By continuing you agree to Terms of Use(New) and Privacy Policy(New)
Messaging rates may apply

Already have an account? Log in

For account settings, visit Fishbowl on Desktop Browser or

General

Legal