Is anyone willing to do a quick resume review? Applying this week to mbb and would love any feedback. I have 1 YOE for reference.

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Jeez the bullets under your digital transformation role sound like you’re bragging to friends. Need more bullets like #2 but without all the fluff. Cut the bs and show me impact

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Agree with Accenture 2 ^

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I see you’re getting lots of great insight from posters who are likely closer to your age and station. From the perspective of an old guy who would be closer to the folks on the other end of this decision I have only one additional piece of advice: Please don’t use golf as a verb. Your interest is in golf, not “golfing” 😂

Good luck!

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Interests: 3-putts

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I’d remove interests. It takes up valuable real estate and tends to be pointless.

And that’s why you work at KPMG 😂

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Add the computer skills at the too and move education to the bottom. Remove SAT scores.

leave test scores - we look at them; this looks great, super easy to read and find the necessary info at first glance (recruiters dream)

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